Yes, I understand exactly what you mean and you are right. If you want that, read Th3 Great Frontier: Foundation. It is a conventional real time story telling adventure. Part of it is also published on wattpad. (Great Frontier a complete book is based on the first chapter of Reborn).
If you read the first chapter you understand that the book Th3 Reborn is a stream of consciousness from a dying guy. And yes that will attract fewer readers. But I accept that because that book is my outline for a whole series of books and covers way too much "time" to tell in the conventional way.
When I first started drafting the book it was my attempt to explain science from my point of view and make sense of it from the beginning of time to the end. I'm here because I want "like minded" people to give me their feedback on the concepts there.
Some of those concepts I mentioned in my first post here. When I wrote them I didn't mean to make it seem as if I were looking for people here who had "done" work in those areas but meant had heard similar theories. I didn't make all my stuff up I just collected it within my lifetime and organized it in this book. Before I did the final edit I wanted to see if I could research those concepts again. Maybe some of them I made up myself but there was always a kernel from somewhere.
I'm not trying to get science to change into my visions of the future of science but to give it some context in which to expand. Just something to consider. I'm told that the reader does get used to my unconventional writing style in this book. For me each chapter is the kernel for a full book of live action and maybe more.
If you go to my profile there you will learn more about me and why I am there at wattpad and why I am here. I've already done some focus groups on each chapter of Th3 Reborn there and got enough feedback to start the final edit there. I learned that the science I tried to tell in the story confused and bored the general reader. I had a couple of science types that loved it so in the final edit I have removed the science from the story, for the most part, and put it in an appendix at the end with links, in case someone wants more of an explanation.
The eBook I have at Amazon has already had the Appendix added to separate the science from the story but it is just cut and pasted. I've not yet done the final edits to make it totally its own story. If it turns out that anyone cares enough I can make that eBook available for free but I really want input to my concepts and story before I put it in print, so either way I would like some feedback. Read or not your choice but even if you don't like something I want the feedback. Does not mean I will change it or agree but I will always consider it. If you ask the people who read my stuff they will tell you I have no problem "fixing" something... lol.